Mitrano dhanywaad dilleya suggestion badal pudhe story :-
Tr magchya bhagat tumhi vachal kas me ratri mallu aunty chya tent madhye jhopun mazya tent chi khutti tichya bhokat ghusvali te. Sakal pasun sagla normle chalu hota, paus utrala hota manun mansa baher padli hoti madat bhetet ka bagayla. Camp madhye fakth bayka ani por, pori mhatare kotare hote. Nashta jhala hota, jevnachi tyaari pan jhali hoti, jevan pan jhala hota banvun, fakth mansanschi vaat bagat hoto ektra basyla.
Tevdhat paus suru jhala, para dho dho dhag kalvandle hote, sosatyacha vara sutla hota. Sagle apalya aaplya tent madhye jau lagle hote. Me mummy sobat tent madhye ghuslo ani tent chi chain lavlun ghetli hoti pani aat shiru naye manun. Tikde bage chya var mla mummy chi chadii disli tevha mla idea aali kal ikde pan jhava jhavi jhali aahe. Mummy la thandi vajat hoti ti kudkudat hoti tila adich sardi pakdali hoti. Mla pan thandi vajat hoti. Aamhi dogani doni blanket ekat ek ghatle ani tyat ghuslo. Doganni ek mekana chitkun hug kela hota mast ubdar vatavarun jhala hota.
Me maza pay mummy chya paya madhye ghysvla hota, tine pan donhi payan madhye maza pay ghetla hota. Mitrano khar sangto mazya manat mummy badal as kai navta, suruvat mummy kadun jhali hoti. Ti mazya payat pay ghasat hoti. Tichya ashya ghasnyane tine mazya aatla jhony sins jagi kela hota. Me pan samorun suru jhalo tevha pan ti shant basun mla ek prakar uksavat hoti.
Mazi mandi tichya mandit ghsa ghasi karu lagli ya level la pan ti mla thambavt navti manje tumchi samja ata kai bolaych. Me maza ghudgha fold karun vr vr karat hoto. Jevdha me pudhe manje var sarkat hoto tevha mla tithtla tapman garam lagalt hota. Me short vr hoto tine dress ghatla hota Punjabi. Ek vel ashi ali maza ghudga tichya pucchi la touch karu lagla hota. Tine mazya kade bagaital kai bolnar tevhdyat tila tichya manatlya vicharani thambaval janu kai as vatal mla. Me mazya ghudghya ne tichi pucchi dabat hoto, tine dole band kele hote.
Me full taplo hoto ani ti samroun dole band karun mla ek prakare cockblock karat hoti. Mla rahaval nai, kal ratri me mazi vrginity loose keli hoti ani mazyat kamalcha confidnace sancharla hota ek prakare as samja ya paristhi ne mla mature banvala hota. Me himmar karun blanket madhunch tichya dress la var karat potavar hath thevla.
Mummy :- ssshh kai kartoys he.
Me :- tula thandi vajtey na, ang thand padlay tuz garmi detoy.
As manat me potavar hath ghasu laglo jyane uab nirman hou lagli. Ti pan shant padli pan ti halu halu shwas ghet hoti. Me bembit bot ghalat hoto, bembi la chimta det hoto. Ti uchakychi, hundke daychi pan thambavat navti. Jyamule mazi himmat vadhli, maza hath halu halu var jau lagla hota. He tila pan janvat hota. Me hath thoda var kela ki ghudghyane khali ek dab daycho parat haluch var jaycho. As karat me haluch tichya davaya ball la hatat pakdla.
Mummy :- aaiag ssshhhh | nko sarak sod | chukich aahe he.
Me :- rahu de na, kon aahe ithe bagayla. Mla mahitey tula garaj aahe, thandi jananr nai ashi.
Me ticha manuka pirghalu laglo ani khalun pucchi pan dabu laglo.
Mummy :- ssshhh aaahh oaahhhnmm nko na, sarak papa aale tr ugach anarth hoil.
Me :- ( ball kuskarat ) nai yenar paus aahe toh paryant, ekda karu de na, me nai sangnar konla tuzi shappath, paus kadhi pan thambel karu de na.
As manat me dusrs ball kuskaru laglo. Ticha virodh shant hot hota. Me khali blanket madhye ghuslo ani dress khali khechat ek ball baher kadhla ani chokhu laglo.
Mummy :- sssh aaah oofffffhhhh aahhhhтАж..
Me maza dusra hath khali nela ani payjamya varun Pucchi vr dabla. Tine aaj Panty navti ghatli, mla pucchi chya varcha jhattyancha bhag janvla hota hatala. Me jas hathane cholat hoto ti garam jhali hoti tine tiche hath dokyaavr nele hote. Me manuka chokhat botani tichi pucchi cholat hoto. Me botani dress varun tichya pucchit bot ghalat hoto. Pucchi cha kapda ola hou lagla hota.
Me ghai ghail payjamachya gathi chi mothi nadi khechli ani double gath padli. Choti nadi khechaychi aste na gath sodyal. Jas double gath padli tichy tondun awaak ala.
Mummy :- ( chukchuk ) thamb sarak me kadhte.
Tine blanket madhye hath ghatla ani gath sodu lagli. Tine gath sodavli ani elastich loose karat payama dhila kela ani hath parat vr kela.
Me parat potavarun halu halu khali payjamat hath ghatla ani tichya pufa vr ( pussu upper flat area ) dabu laglo. Ti blanket madhye pay halvu lagli, fakvu lagli. Dogh eka blanket madhye asylamule sarkh baher jat hoto.
Mummy :- vr ye na as jaga nai hot aahe doghana.
Me tichya var aalo, tine mla changla gundala blanket madhye, me tichya mane var kiss karu laglo. Mummy ne mzya tshirt madhye hath ghatla ani pathi varun phrivu lgli. Ti swata position gheun bullya la pucchi vr lavat hoti. Dogh dress varun ghasa ghasi karar hoto. Me hatat hath ghatla ani tichya tondat tond dila. Tine dole band kele ani aamhi doghani pahili kisa keli javardsat. Ti gand udvun bullya la pucchi vr lavat hoti. Kiss todat ti manali,
Mummy :- kadh na kapde, kadhi pan yetil ti lok, yaychya adhi jhal pahije.
Me uthun chaddi kadhli, tine pan pajayma kadhla ani fakli, tichi clean shave pucchi mla disli, toh vel navta ekdum aarmshir karyacha. Ti pan ghai ghai karat hoti. Tine pay fakvat mla ishara kela. Me var chadhlo.
Mummy :- blanket odh na angavar.
Me blanket ghetla angavar, tine mla tichya payat ghetla. Ti gand halvat bullya la pucchi ghaych bagat hoti. Me pan varun andha dhundi shot lavat hoto. 3-4 try nanter bullya la hole bhetla ani kach kan skin mage hot aat ghusla.
Mummy :- ssshh aaah gela gela aat aaahтАж Ata dhakke maar.
Me dhakke mru laglo, ti mazya kambre la pakdun dole band karun tond ughdun hundke det hoti.
Mummy :- hnmm aaah hmmm aaa hhh hhh aaaa aahтАж
Me :- halu awaj baher jail.
Tas ti shant basli, tine hoth datani dable ani pay havet fakun majja ghet hoti. Ticha chehra tumhi bagyla pahije hota. Mla vattay edvhi majja tila ata paryant kadhi ala nsava. Ti evdhya lavkar mla jhavyla deil as mla swapanat pan vatal navta. Jar pausane he thaiman mandla nasta tr kadachit aayush bhar aamhi kela nasta. Pan aaj paristhi ch ashi aali hoti, bap, beta, aai kai disat navta lavdyaa ani pucchi pudh. Fakth jhava ani jhavu dya. Ang garam Kara karan saglyana mahit hota parat kadhi aayushat asa mok yenar nai.
Me kacha kach jhavat hoto tila, tichya dolyatun pani yeu lagla hota. Tond dabun pan hundkyacha tevdhcha awaaj yet hota. Maza nighnar hotaa manun me tila vicharal,
Me :- kai kru aatch sodu ka.
Mummy :- sssh sshhh hmmm karat raha thambu nko..
Me dhakke marat rahilo, dhakke marta martach me aat pichkari sodli. Tri me thamblo nai. Tila pan tech hav hota. Sutun pan bulla tath hota me ajun jhavatch hoto tila. Chikane purn pucchi pandhri padli hoti, chik mazya jhangevar lagla hota. Chikach sagla ghatta pandhara face jhala hota. Bulla parat nuni jhla tevha kuth me shant jhalo ani padlo tichya var. Tine ghatta pakdun thevla 3 min. Nanter var sakrat Panty uchalli ani tichya ne pucchi saaf keli. Maza lavda pan pusla ani parat tikde fekli.
Me :- kas vatal, garam vattay na
Mummy :- bolu nkos, shant bas, mla ya vaishayavar na bolaych.
Mla tila guilty karaych navata. Tine payjama ghtala parat, me tent chi chain ughdun bagital tr paus joratch suru hota. Aamhi doghe part chadrit ghuslo. Me tila ghatta pkdun padlo hoto. Paus thambaych naavch ghet navta. Maza part mood jhala. Ya veli me dircet dress madhye hath ghalun ball baher kadhlaa ani chokhu laglo. Mummy chya kana la chtau laglo tila gram kela.
Ticha hath pakdun bullya var thevla ti pan bulla cholu lagli. Ya veli me eka phatkyat nada sodla, hatane ticha payjama khali kela ani payat ghuslo. Mla as vatat hota mummy la nai mazya bayko lach jhvtoy. Ti pan ekdum bayko sarkh sath det hoti. Bulla pucchi la lavun ghasu laglo tas ti tadpat hoti pan kai bolat navti asch ghasta ghasta kach kan aat ghusvala.
Mummy :- aaaig ssshhh.
Me tichya dokyala pakdat dolyat dole ghalun jhavat hoto tila. Ti pan mla bagat hoti, me hoth chavat tondat tond ghatla ani jhaavta jhavta kissing chalu thevli. Ya vaels mla jast vel lagla jyamule tila ajun majja aali. Ti fakun kacha kach ghet hoti mla. Ya veles jast chik nai nighala pan sutla tas me tichya angavar padlo ani bulla pucchit ch thevla. Ti maze kes kuravalt mla tasch var gheun padli hoti. Aamcha dola lagla hota. Achanak aamhlaa bhande vajnyacha awaaj ala aamhi jage jhalo. Maza bulla tichya pucchitch hota, amhi uthun vegle jhlo ani kapde ghatle. Tine chain ughdli ani baher geli, me aavrjn baher aalo tr sgale aavrat hote, mansa ale navte pan jevaychi tyaari krat hote. Por jevayla ghet hote. Tine mla pan basvla ani jevan gheun ali.
Jevtana mansa pan aali, aamcha jhalyaver te sagle basle ektra. Me 2 divsat 2 bayka jhavlya hotya ek mazi gharchi ani ek anolkhi. Mla tr as vatat hota janu me ek hero ch aahe. Ti mallu mla line det hoti najar det hoti. Ekde mummy pan najar lagu det navti. Bgun veglich react vaychi. Divas kasa tri kadhaycha hota. Ratri me tya mallu chi marnar hoto ch as na tas.. Pan ajun story madhye jaam. Twist n turn aahet, kas kai jhala he next part mdhye vacha.
Mitrano dhanywaad tumhi je comment lihun support karta. But sorry me tumhla wait karavto. Mla kalta pan kas aahe me roj roj story lihu shakat nai, roj yavar ch lihit baslo ki ekch repetitive imagination yet, madhye madhye gap ghetla ki ideas yetat, pluse kahi kaam astat ek story lihayla 2-3 divas jatat karn me ekta nasto kuthech. Vel kadhun, lamb jaun, vegla basun lihav lagta ata pausamule te pan jamat naiye. 2-3 vela pakdta pakdta vachloy. So week madhye ekda kiva max 2 nda story submitted karel. I hope tumhi samjun ghyal. Jar free aslo anj story pan asel tr takat jail regular.